Blog post report Madison Klump
Have you ever heard of people Time-Traveling, or the
holocaust, or people getting stoned. Well we have been reading some stories in
my English 219 class that has to do with these things. The story, that has to
do with someone getting stoned, was called “The Lottery”. The book that sounds
like it had to do with the holocaust and Time-Traveling was called SlaughterHouse-Five.
“The Lottery” that was wrote in 1948 by Shirley Jackson. It
was about someone getting stoned. The towns people in this story make it sound
like it was just another day to them. The story started with “The morning of
June 27th was clear and sunny, with the warmth of a full summer day,
the flowers were blossoming profusely and the grass was richly green” (Page 1).
They then went on to talk about how there was a meeting in the town and how the
children were finding rocks and putting them in a pile while the adults had a
meeting. During the meeting they talked about how they had to draw a piece of
paper from a black box. If the piece of paper had a dot on it it meant that you
were the one that had to get stoned. They said that “Lottery in June, corn be
heavy soon” (Page 4). So, they also believe that if they stone someone that it
will make their crops grow better. Also, when some of the towns people were
talking someone said something about how some of the towns around them stopped
doing the lottery and Old Man Warner snorted and said “Pack of crazy fools”
(Page 4). So, he is saying that the towns that stopped having the lottery are
crazy because they need to have the lottery to make the crops grow and if they
stop it their crops won’t be that good that year.
SlaughterHouse-Five was wrote by Kurt Vonnegut. I believe
that in SlaugherHouse-Five some of the scene that the narrator talks about Bill
have to do with the holocaust. On page 163 he say’s “It was a report on the
behavior in Germany of American enlisted men as prisoners.” I believe this has
to do with the holocaust because it talks about people being put in prisons in
Germany. Another time that I believe they are talking about the holocaust is on
page 73. On page 73 they say “A German was kicking his feet, telling him to
wake up, that it was time to move on”. I believe that this has to do with it,
because I remember when I went to the holocaust museum in Washington, D.C. they
talked about how they made the people walk to a camp or walk to a train. The
last one I’m going to talk about is when he says “Human beings in there took
turns standing or laying down. The legs of those that were standing were like
fence post driven into warm, squirming, farting, signing earth”. I believe that
this quote has to do with it because when the Jews were forced into the train
carts there would be no room for them to move around or sometimes even lay
down.
In the book SlaughterHouse-Five the narrator talks about how
Billy Pilgrim Time-Travels. I believe that he is Time-Traveling when he is
going back through his memories. One time he talks about it is when he says “He
had already seen a lot of their marriage, thanks to Time-Traveling, knew that
it was going to be at least bearable all the way” (page 153). Here I believe
that he is going back through his memories of when he got married. Another time
he talks about it is when he say’s “Billy was loony with Time-Traveling and
morphine” (Page 157). Here I believe he is going back through his memories of
when he was in the hospital getting morphine. The last one I’m going to take
about is when he said “Billy and Valencia went to sleep nested like spoons and
Billy traveled in time back to the train ride that he had taken in 1944 from
Maneuver in South Carolina to his father’s funeral in Ilium” (page 161). Again,
he talks about riding a train to go to his Dad’s funeral.
So, in these two stories that I talked about which again were
“The Lottery” and “SlaughterHouse-Five” and how they talked about it was just
another day and how they believe stoning someone would make their crops grow
better and how in SlaughtHouse-Five Billy was Time-Traveling and what I think
it means and the book has to do with the Holocaust.
Hi Madison,
ReplyDeleteYou bring up some great observations here. From this point, I want you to work on clarifying your main idea and clarifying the examples you provide. First, I would rewrite the first paragraph. Take out the questions and avoid using "you" pronouns when discussing literature. The use of "you" is usually used when referring to a specific person or when one is giving commands or directions. In your first paragraph, get right to the point, which I think you are trying to connect "The Lottery" to the Holocaust and 'SHF' to time travel. I think you should avoid trying to discuss both of these stories because it makes your analysis confusing without an explanation of the overall connection between the two stories. I would choose one of these stories. For instance, if you focus on "The Lottery"/Holocaust connection, you need to organize your ideas and elaborate a bit more on the examples you provide.